Ravynfyre @ 2011-05-20
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The idea here is simple and cute, a sweet evening captured and a hope for the future. Adorable. The execution of telling this story - as in, the writing - could use some polishing. A little more character development, perhaps a more in depth connection then a summer romance so long ago... and really heroine with something resembling a spine would have been nice. She was just very...nice and sweet but.. drippy and kind of pathetic. Eh. i would not suggest this story, but it's a quick read and free, so not much lost there.