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Fun but sloppily written military SF
Oddly enough, while I enjoyed most of the Honor series, most other military sci-fi leaves me yawning, including other David Weber books. But somehow, the snappy writing and enjoyable characters, boneheads included, make for a book with very few places where you can set it down long enough to grab a cookie.
The Laiden novels probably do a better job at character, of the people and the culture, and might edge this novel down to 4 3/4 stars in comparison, but there are darn few 5 stars on my list to quibble over a tiny margin.
My mixed reaction to a book I enjoyed
So first, let me lay out my biases. I am a big fan of the early Honor Harrigton books, less so of the later ones (although I read them religiously anyway), and I also like Weber's Shadow of Saganami series, where he follows people who haven't risen to the astronomical heights attained by Honor (and thus are free actually to head out into space and shoot things up). What I loved about the early Honor books is that the twisty plots and the character mesh so nicely. I also love the Liaden books, and consider them to be better written than the Weber books. Lately, I've been enjoying the Alex Benedict books and the USS Merimack books. What these books all have in common is interesting characters who are tossed into situations that call up the best and the worst they have to offer.
This is also the strength of this book. Kris Longknife is a vividly drawn young woman, and unlike many heroes of such novels, she is a realistically young 22-year-old. At the start of the book, she doesn't have a good answer for "Why did you join the Navy?" or more specifically, "Why will you stay in the Navy?" In the course of the book, she finds better answers. She has innate leadership skills, but she hasn't grasped the responsibility of command as deeply as she thinks she has, and the sequences where this is pointed out to her (first rather brutally and later very movingly) are well-designed. What's more, she learns from them, and the Kris who walks out of the book at the end is not the same one who walked in on the first page. She's more mature, and more aware of her own faults, and (maybe most importantly) she understands her family/career situation in a more nuanced way than she did at the start.
The book was an easy fun read, and I'm looking forward to the others in the series.
I enjoyed this book immensely, and am looking forward to the next one. (I wonder what Mike's title was; this title sounds more like marketing than anything else.)
Sloppy writing but a pleasent read none the less
The story itself in a interesting one and a fun read. But there are so many inconsistancies; name changes, tense changes, several places the word "a" or "an" is missing, there are spelling errors of the most basic sort and etc, that they take away from the punch of the story. Oh don't get me wrong this is a fun read but it could have used some serious proof editing.
Kris has spent much of her life trying to avoid her mothers plans to turn her into a lady, the usless sort of lady. So Kris joins the navy and carries on the tradition of being one of those "damn Longknives!"
The characters are pretty decent as well. I'm not going to call Kris Longknife another Honor Harrington by a long shot, but there are moments where she is very likable.
But the writing.... my god, the descriptive writing is weak and awkward. And the dialogue was equally awkward until I started imagining everyone talking with stiff upper crust British accents. Even then, there are a few conversations in the book (especially when the Highlanders show up) which I just could not stand to read for more than 2 minutes at a time because they were so cheesy.
I might give the second book a chance to see if the writer improves any and find out where the over-all story goes... but my advice for anyone considering this book is to wait until you don't have anything better to read, and then give it a chance if you're desperate.
I fully admit I did not read the whole book. In fact, I only read the first fifteen pages. I just found the main character to be weak and the constant flashbacks to be, well, unconducive to good reading. I understand she's young, scared, has hangups about her history. But when she's in the middle of a mission and she's having these wimpy italised moments, I just want to roll my eyes and skip forward.
There are many reviewers who did enjoy this book, and the fact that there are many more in this series shows many people out there do like this book. I'm just being honest and putting my 2 cents on the table.
Kris is not the gritty protagonist of other military science fiction works such as say Ripley from Aliens although neither is she a bubble head. I thought this book was fun and fast but yet tackled many serious subjects such as post traumatic stress, survivor guilt, and even alcohol abuse. We watch Kris mature through her mission assignments and at the same time she tries to unlock not only the mysteries of the galaxy but her own seemly related interlocking mysteries of her own family dynamics.
Note: Although I'm reading the 2nd novel in the series in print, and so far it is just as good, I listened to Mutineer on audio books. The voice actress did an amazing job and it seemed like there were at least 30 characters in which to differentiate. It sure made a long drive go fast!
The main character, Kris Longknife, starts out as a fresh ensign. As the book goes on, Kris has many experiences. She learns more about herself and why she's in the Navy.
Some things I didn't like about the story: In some places I found it hard to follow scene changes, and follow who was talking to who. I also thought the political and technological background were very generic. These characters and this story could have been placed in almost any timeframe and location. There wasn't anything about the story that makes it "sci-fi", particularly.
I discovered one interesting thing after reading the book. I looked at the copyright statement on the first page and discovered Mike Shepherd is a pseudonym for Mike Moscoe, who has written other stories in the same universe. I don't know why he changed names, unless his previous stuff has a bad reputation, but I haven't read any of it.
Part of this is the writing style, which I never really got into. It was pretty simplistic, had an overabundance of exclamation marks and random capitalization of things that may have been meant as jokes but that fell flat. I had this book recommended by Amazon.com when I purchased Tanya Huff's latest book from her Valor series and I am seriously disappointed that the bot was comparing Huff's witty, strong, amazing Gunnery Sergeant Kerr to the barbie-doll with no substance that is Kris Longknife. You may like this book if you enjoy mindless wish-fulfillment in a space-navy setting, but not if you actually want a strong, well-written character in a gripping story.
Must be Good, I'm ReReReReading
As an Army Brat, it has a special appeal for me because it "feels" like a Book written (which it is) by someone who understands Military Life instead of a Book written by a Civilian trying to imagine Military existence. I can't make the same claim for the Political side of Life since I avoid that Arena like the Plague. Yet it "feels" right and appropriate.
In fact, I think Appropriate is the perfect word to describe the whole Book. Everything fit where it was placed. I didn't find myself having to stop to gather my thoughts or go back to see what I must have missed since something didn't make sense all of a sudden. It flowed from one scene / conversation to the next.
The story never began to drag. I was caught by the descriptions, the action, and the conversations from the very beginning and stayed caught until the end. A most excellent SciFi Action Tale!
With one exception, the language stayed within my "Blush" level. Nothing worse than what you hear on TV on a regular basis ... even on Fox News ... and some shows supposedly geared towards youths. Even more importantly, there was nothing that I had to skim over because there was too much sex or too graphic sex scenes.
That one exception was within a conversation with a "Sailor". And even I was able to accept the couple of words that went above & beyond my Blush Level because they fit the context.
The Kindle Version only had a couple of conversion errors that caught my attention. And they only slowed me down for a second or two. The Table of Contents works perfectly. The Copyrights Page is there. The Cover's there, but it sure ain't much to look at! The images aren't there. But that has no impact on my enjoyment whatsoever.
Great Start to a Very Good Series
Some will compare this to Honor Harrington, although the two series are quite different in tone and focus. I enjoyed the Honor series (at least until the end, when they became a bit repititious and also too military tactic heavy for my taste), and this new series has more of an emphasis on character development.
Plenty of action, interesting concepts, all part of the old fashioned space opera sagas. But this one does not require a list kept to the side to remember scores of characters, and the descriptions are sufficient to give one an understanding of context, but not so detailed as to encourage one to skip the paragraphs for more action-oriented material.
This started the series. While the series itslef is a bit uneven, it does have flashes of excellence (along with the unfortunate minor errors in text that good editing would have caught). And while it's not necessary to read them all to understand any one standing by itself, there is a sense of character development which is enhanced by reading them in order. Plots shifts are explained, but it's fun to watch the development of some of the characaters (expecially her pet computer) over time.
Not great literature, but a highly pleasant diversion.
Kris's strong points aren't strategy and tactics so much as organizational skills and the ability to get people to believe in her. And she succeeds in this in three separate tests of her skills--one involving a kidnap rescue, another a mercy mission to a disaster-stricken planet, and then finally she is involved in Clausewitz's "diplomacy by other means."
Mike Shepherd has a clear no-frills writing style, his plotting is first-rate, and his characters are believeable.
I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the novels in this promising series, especially as the author appears to have deliberately left some ends loose.
Fun enough, but definitely no Harrington
The problems tend to come not with Longknife herself, who is well-fleshed out, but everyone around her--all flat, some stereotyped. I'm not sure why someone from an Irish-Chinese planet HAS to go on and on repeatedly in casual conversation about "his ancestors" and the "wee folk"; no Irish or Chinese people I know do that whether or not that's their culture and/or beliefs. All of her superiors have one mode: crush her, either career-wise or worse.
All in all, Kris Longknife: Mutineer (a misnomer, taking the book as a whole and not as the last couple chapters) is a good concept, a good seed, but the fruit isn't yet ripe.
The main character, Kris Longknife, is young and plucky, and almost too capable, and yet has enough demons and doubts to be likable.
Overall, an exciting and amusing story, much like the earlier Honor Harrington installments.
Pleasant read, avoids standard scifi pitfalls
a thrilling read that i couldnt put down-
This is some of the best science-fiction writing I've read in recent years. Reminds me of Jerry Pournelle's works on Falkenberg's Legion, and with all the gutsy raw combat definitions that keep you glued to every page.
I rarely recommend an author's book, but this one you sci-fi lovers of space warfare--empires have really got to read.
Solid adventure with a good cast of characters.
Ensign Mary Sue saves the galaxy, does 4 impossible things before breakfast and
This was so bad I couldn't finish it. Imagine watered down David Weber and you'll have the general idea of this book. Plucky junior officer who'd smarter, braver and so much better than anyone else in the universe. An uber Mary Sue who, as a brand new "ensign" leads a successful marine hostage rescue (after a brilliant orbit to ground landing of a disabled shuttle craft forces them to use `plan B' which she developed on her own time after her superior officers decided a backup plan wasn't needed)
Cartoon villains. An example of the wretched purple prose of the `evil' captain Thorpe:
"Those orders come from the people with the guts to take what you money-grabbing wimps have hoarded for yourselves. You have no use for duty, honor. You let power lie around, wasted. Well, some of us know how to use power. There's Earth's power, sitting fat and dumb. In one minute we're going to blast it to bits. How's that for power?" Thorpe raised his fist. "And if Earth comes back, we'll blast them again. We've had enough of being your bootlicking dogs, Longknife. Now we'll do what is right. Gunny, shoot that dog."
The entire story is hamstrung by purple prose, nonsensical and confusing plot and idiot characters.
Try a library copy first to see if you like it.
The only way I could suspend disbelief on this one would be with a couple of Chinook Sky Cranes.
Kris Longknife is from a rich and powerful family yet joins the Navy. Why? Even she didn't know at first but as we follow her from conflict to another we watch she develop and become more than just a confused Ensign to a complete human being.
This book had all the essential features that makes a great SF series. The story begins with Kris in the middle of a dangerous rescue scene and the action is pretty much consistent from there. The author grabbed my attention right from the beginning. This high adventure series is now right up there with my all-time favorite SF series, Galaxy Unknown by Thomas DePrima.
I highly recommend this book to fellow SF fans. To those fellow dark urban fantasy readers, looking for a good SF but don't want to end up with space romance; I highly recommend this book to you, as the style of writing is similar to an urban fantasy read. I also look forward to the next book in the series Deserter.
I also recommend:
Against All Odds (A Galaxy Unknown, Book 7)
Peacekeeper: A Major Ariane Kedros Novel
Children of Scarabaeus (Scarabaeus, Book 2)
Space Trippers Book 1: Trippin'
The Darkest Edge of Dawn (Charlie Madigan, Book 2)
Join the Society's 24th Century Navy; see the Universe
This book has some really wonderful elements. First of all, it's sci fi/high fiction, so we're in the 24th century, on a few different planets. Even so, it's more a military novel, following the Navy career of Kris Longknife and the political structure of the Society among over 100 planets that have human life expansion. We don't see any aliens, and most fantastic elements have to do with computers and technology. I should mention that the book was written in 1994, meaning that Nelly - Kris's personal (pet) AI computer - is probably a bit less powerful than the newest Android.
Be it as it may, the story is excellent, and very, very military. If you're into the politics of internal command hierarchy, or into rescue and humanitarian distress mission, it's a fun read. It's also interesting to hear a man write a story where the heroine is a 22-year-old female. He gets a lot of things right, but I think it's more because she's a soldier, and Mike Shepherd was Navy himself, so he knows a thing or two in the regard.
My only real criticism is that this book was a lack of cohesion - it seemed to be separated in three parts: rescue mission & return home (very well done; we really understand Kris's history from the mission, and we get a good understanding of her family - the prime minister family of an entire planet - from her return home); humanitarian mission on Olympia (this part sags. It tells us a lot of Kris's character and leadership abilities, but it gets too bogged down in the moral implications and reflections on a soldier's duties); and mission to attack (this is the crowning moment and the name-sake of the book). Unfortunately, these three parts don't meld too well. I would have liked to see a bit less soldiering, a bit more politicking, and maybe even a love interest beyond one guy asking Kris out to lunch.
On Narration:
Dina Pearlman is excellent. If you are familiar with Jeanne C. Stein's Anna Strong series, or Rachel Caine's Weather Warden series, you know what I mean. She does a wonderful Irish accent, which takes up a good half-hour of reading when the Highlanders visit Olympia. She also does a great job with internal dialogue versus external dialogue. At times in the book, Kris makes comments basically to herself. Since the book is written in third-person, the way Dina Pearlman reads these lines versus external dialogue is very important to the listener, and she does it successfully.
A Fun Quick and Entertaining Read
trap aimed at Kris most likely by Henry Peterwald. This makes things interesting as Kris is feeling some
attachment to his son Hank. There is some humor here, the ships of the Kamikaze class are made out of
smart metal that can be reconfigured on the fly to give better armor or more interior room-but it doesn't
quite work as expected. Lockers and gear don't turn up where they are supposed to among other things. The
Society of Humanity is starting to come apart due to Earth having very different priorates than the Rim. For
instance the Senate approved a full navy funding bill but the Earth president refused to appropriate the
money to fund it. So now fast attack squadron 6 and Kris are inactive for 3 months. This lets the Navy sip her off
to Olympia where a volcano explosion has created a disaster with a years worth of acid rain. She gets Colonel
Hancock and his command straightened up (Hancock was found not guilty on charges that he needlessly
opened fire on some unarmed farmers but his actions were not approved and when he refused to resign he
was put in charge of a real mess with no way out.) The mutiny comes later when a huge Earth fleet is sent out
to the Rim as a part of the dissolution of the Society of Humanity nearly starting a war. This is one of the weak
spots in the book as it is not explained. Similarly there appears to be evidence that the Peterwalds had a astroid
dropped on the volcano to trigger the disaster-but this is never confirmed.
Overall a good story with a few flaws, well written with good chacterization, not up to Weber but still much
better than average.
There might be some weak spots, but I missed then and found it a good read. Not a sword or wizard in the darned thing which rates it high right from the start.
action-packed outer space military science fiction
Wanting to give something back to society, Kris joins the navy and her first assignment in a leadership position is to rescue a kidnapped child being held by men who have technology not available to the public. On her second command, she almost single handedly brings relief to the planet Olympia, falling apart due to volcanic activity and bad weather. Yet her greatest danger comes in a form she could never expect, one that will force her to take the road least traveled and faces the consequences.
No one who has read KRIS LONGKNIFE MUTINEER will hope there with be further adventures starring this brave, independent and intrepid heroine. Mike Shepherd has written an action-packed, exciting space opera that starts at light speed and just keeps getting faster. This is outer space military science fiction is at its adventurous best.
Harriet Klausner
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Good points:
- Good characters, well portrayed.
- Good action scenes.
- A neat technology, 'smart metal,' which lets ships change shape depending on what you need them for. Though we never really see how it happens--we just see before and after.
- The protagonist was probably an alcoholic as a child, something I've never seen done in literature before, but again the camera blinks and we later hear that 'maybe it was just the pills her mother made her take,' and she occasionally has a drink, and except for some angst it doesn't affect her.
- The Palm Pilot equivalents of the future with personalities. It's been done before, but it's handled nicely here.
Bad points:
- The title is poor, since Kris is only a mutineer for a few pages, about 350 page into the book.
- The name Longknife is implausible enough, but a kris _is_ a long knife. That's just over the top...
- Enemies are sometimes straw figures. After an initially convincing setup they often roll over and play dead as needed. Allies too--why wouldn't her father, the Prime Minister of her planet, investigate attempts on her life?
- Technology often appears just to do some job, isn't explained, and then goes away.
- In a similar vein, her great-grandfathers are over a hundred and still active, but the longevity situation is never mentioned and there are no other old characters.
- Somewhat muddled politics, only explained gradually over the course of the book.
- The family relationships are also only explained hundreds of pages into the book.
- Both of Kris's paternal grandfathers are named Longknife. Either there's inbreeding going on or it didn't occur to the author how names are handed down.
- Quiet a bit of heavy-handed sermonizing, which I skipped over.
- Lots of minor errors, e.g.,
+ p.297 has Grandpa Ray storming Black mountain instead of Grandpa Trouble
+ we've been told it's the 24th century, but p.319 has a date in the 25th century
+ Kris is described as tall, but on p.364 we're told she weighs 123 pounds.
In a nutshell, it's a fun enough read if you don't take it too seriously, but it needed more editing.